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Mar. 30th, 2003 | 02:58 am

Hi Don!
I was delighted to see an improvement in your writing. You have the potential to become a talented writer once you master the subtleties of the formal writing style by avoiding words like "it is." I am sure that you proofread the paper thoroughly even though I found a few oversights. Your writing was very clear and succinct except in some places you had a few punctuation and writing issues as you will see when you review the attached paper. You were very proactive in the last week and you posted at least 3 messages all of the required days. Therefore, you have earned the following points for week 5:
Individual Paper 13.6 out of 15
Project 9.3 out of 10
Participation 4 out of 4
Therefore, you have accumulated a grand total of 92.8 points which you will earn an "A-" for the course. I wish you the best in your continuing pursuit of knowledge at UOP.
Bob


WHOO HOO!!!

I got an A- in my first course... I'm happy as all hell.. LMAO

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james

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from: fgcusabre
date: Mar. 30th, 2003 12:42 am (UTC)
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great job...only what...10 more classes to go?

at fgcu I have taken over 60 classes by now...lol...

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Mar. 30th, 2003 12:48 am (UTC)
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I have a SHITLOAD of classes let to go.. LMAO

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Michelle

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from: soul_incognito
date: Mar. 30th, 2003 03:06 am (UTC)
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congrats on the good mark hun *mua*

I know you'll keep knockin' 'em over with your style. You've got what it takes.

Love ya...I'm still thinking of you always..and yes, still reading ;-)

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from: cutelilsk8er
date: Mar. 30th, 2003 02:43 pm (UTC)
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Yay you!

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Apr. 3rd, 2003 10:05 pm (UTC)
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thank you!!

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Trista

gold star

from: rylasedai
date: Mar. 31st, 2003 09:01 am (UTC)
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here's a gold star for your hard work. YAY!

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Mar. 31st, 2003 09:06 am (UTC)
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whoo hoo!!
wanna pu it on your fridge? :-* hehe

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