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Jan. 6th, 2003 | 03:59 am
mood: accomplished

OK, I have never really written poetry before... I have tried (failed miserably usually)
Tonight I decided to write a poem.... so, please, don't laugh... A poem is not a poem unless it is from the heart :-D



I was walking down the road.
All nice and lit
When something caught my eye on the left
I turned off the road and went towards the sight
suddenly I fell
into a hidden hole that I did not expect
I am falling now
weightlessness
I can not feel walls nor floor nor ceiling
The feelings mixed, confusion
fear
losing grip
bad
scared
alone
slipping
grasping
reaching
scrambling
missing
scattered
together
fun
good
wonderful
flying
lovely
-----------------
I get my balance
relief
I'm safe
begin to think again
I take a deep breath
It feels right
---------------
It's ok
It's all ok
It will all be ok...

--DCL

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Caitlin

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from: thatgirlcaitlin
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 07:22 am (UTC)
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You are so right.
All poetry comes from within.

That is beautiful.

<3 caitlin.

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 08:38 am (UTC)
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Thank you!! :-D

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Meg

OoOoOoO Poetry!

from: megan716
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 09:51 am (UTC)
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That was good, Don.

It makes me feel as though things were bad for a while but they are coming up!:) It gives a sense of hope at the end.

And I hope to see some more poetry from you!!!

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Don

Re: OoOoOoO Poetry!

from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 09:55 am (UTC)
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I gots ta be inspired :-D

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from: missygent
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 01:45 pm (UTC)
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That was pretty good Don!

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 02:10 pm (UTC)
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*shrugs*
I tried...

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Amy

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from: amygodess
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 09:02 pm (UTC)
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beautiful :)

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 6th, 2003 10:08 pm (UTC)
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Thank you :-D
What do you think about the next one?

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Care

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from: careleswhisper
date: Jan. 8th, 2003 01:39 am (UTC)
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Hey there. I was one of the people who liked your poem that you posted on ljconfessional. I wanted to thank you for deleting the posts of them telling you and myself to die. I know it's just the internet and words are just words, but that still was pretty rude of them to write. So thanks again. I'm going to add you so I can read more of your poetry. Don't let what those jerks say over at ljconfessional bother you. Keep on writing. :) *hugs*

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 8th, 2003 06:15 am (UTC)
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ahhh, I will add you with pleasure.
There is only one other poem in my journal right now.. and it is.. well..
like a couple posts after this one, but a million posts back cause I have been VERY bored the last couple days...

Now, you have GOT to teach me how to read this special message stuff...
cause if ya don't then it'll get REALLY frustrating...
AUGHHHHHH
see? already starting :-P

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Care

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from: careleswhisper
date: Jan. 8th, 2003 05:00 pm (UTC)
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LOL sorry about the frustration. I posted the website below. Have fun. :) http://www.nickciske.com/tools/binary.php

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 8th, 2003 05:04 pm (UTC)
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YAY!!! Now I can read your deepest darkest secrets!!! lol

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