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Jan. 17th, 2003 | 12:33 am

first submission...
This was made by the talented fgcusabre



What does everyone think?
Good?
Bad?
Could make it better?
You have other ideas?
let me know!

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Kristen

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from: luckydragongirl
date: Jan. 16th, 2003 09:46 pm (UTC)
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I like it! Very dignified.

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 16th, 2003 09:51 pm (UTC)
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domo arigatou gozaimasu :-D lol

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james

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from: fgcusabre
date: Jan. 16th, 2003 09:48 pm (UTC)
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i like it :)

its peaceful...but admittingly it can use touching up...maybe a more bold font saying funeral home....something more classic...but my fonts are all gone

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 16th, 2003 09:52 pm (UTC)
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Well, maybe someone on here who has them will take it and mess with it then?
never know :-D

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To Be or Not to Be, huh?

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from: 2mermaids
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 08:19 am (UTC)
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Good job James:O) Ever thought of advertising? It's competitive.

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To Be or Not to Be, huh?

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from: 2mermaids
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 08:14 am (UTC)
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I really like it. It's suttle, but to the point. It is also pleasing to the eye, since your business isn't a happy one for people. No offense, but it's true.:O)

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 30th, 2003 12:25 pm (UTC)
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Thats how it was supposed to look... See most recent post...

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acid eyes

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from: booffiegirl
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 08:19 am (UTC)
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i like it!

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Skye Lyn

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from: renaissancelove
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 08:43 am (UTC)
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I really like it. It has this very peaceful feel to it. It gets the point you are trying to make across without being to gawdy. Very professional, very nice and not to over powering. It is definately a keeper. :)

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Care

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from: careleswhisper
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 11:13 am (UTC)
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I like the design. It's simple and calm. What my question is how are you going to layout the rest of the contact info?

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james

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from: fgcusabre
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 01:58 pm (UTC)
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good question...

what do people think about sideways businnes cards?

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james

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from: fgcusabre
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 03:43 pm (UTC)
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i cleaned this up a bit more...it is alot more clear...the reason why it looks like crap on the net is because a browser only supports so many colors...the original bmp i have is cleaner and i will send to don later.

I retyped the text and made some adjustments like the italics on their names and bold title.

I also added a border on the card...maybe one mm from the edge...you can get fancy...the card company could help with that.

I am thinking put this on a light badge color card stock would look spiffy.


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james

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from: fgcusabre
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 03:59 pm (UTC)
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and the long view looks decent too

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 04:04 pm (UTC)
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I like this one best... except... my fathers name looks bigger than mine.. and funeral home is said twice on the left side...

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james

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from: fgcusabre
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 04:09 pm (UTC)
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i could not think of what font i like better...maybe funeral home needs to be larger...i am not sure...

And yea...your right...I was thinking your dads name looked bigger too....why I do not know....its an optical illusion....the world may never know...

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Care

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from: careleswhisper
date: Jan. 17th, 2003 04:51 pm (UTC)
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Looks nice. Very good job. :)

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Don

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from: shoshiki
date: Jan. 30th, 2003 11:41 am (UTC)
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I like this one best... Just don't like it saying "funeral home" twice....

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